Level 1-
Pain is so Close (Q): Increases the Spell Armor granted by Poison Bolt to 18.
Agony Abounds (W): Increases the radius of Venom Spray by 20%. Venom Spray also lasts for an additional 2 seconds.
Pleasure in Pain (Trait): Every active stack of Anguish increases your attack speed by 2%
Level 4-
Sympathetic Bleeder (Q): Poison Bolt now pierces its first target and deals 15% more damage total.
Lethargy (W): Venom Spray now slows the attack speed of all affected targets by 25% for the duration of the DoT
Abundant Anguish (Trait): Every ten stacks of Anguish you generate permanently increases your Basic Attack damage by 1
Level 7-
Just Getting Started (Q): Poison Bolt now slows the movement speed of the affected target by 20% for the duration of the DoT
Acrid Venom (W): Venom Spray now applies two stacks of Anguish to all affected targets
Writhe in Agony (E): Your Basic Attacks now lower the cooldown of Blinding Pain by 0.6 seconds.
Level 10-
Maiden of Anguish (R1)
Piercing Agony (R2)
Level 13-
The Fun's Not Over Yet (E): Blinding Pain only consumes up to 3 stacks of Anguish, stunning for 0.5 seconds per stack.
Always a Victim (Trait): If Anguish is toggled to its healing mode, you gain 1% movement speed for each stack you have active
Toxic Love (Q): Poison Bolt spreads a half-strength version of its DoT to enemies near the primary target upon its expiration
Level 16-
Lethal Harmony (W): Casting Venom Spray makes your next Poison Bolt 30% stronger
Stunning Handiwork (E): Upon the expiration of Blinding Pain, all nearby enemies are Slowed by 20% for the same duration as the stun
Shared Pain (Trait): When a target reaches 10 stacks of Anguish, 2 stacks are applied to all nearby enemies
Level 20-
Feast of Suffering (R1)- The maximum number of Anguish stacks on any given target is increased to 15, and Maiden of Anguish now applies 15 stacks of Anguish
Sympathy for the Devil (R2)- Piercing Agony also heals you for 110(+4%) per stack
Blood Frenzy (Passive)- your Basic Attack speed is permanently increased by 30%
Nexus Blades (Passive)
Heroes of the Storm Build Guides
Is there anything in particular thst you like, or is it just everything together?
However, it's extremely over powered.
Making a hero 30% vulnerable, or healing yourself for 20% max health per second is insane.
You need to take those numbers down to 1%.
And make the healing per hit, not per second.
Also don't let basic abilities add stacks, and stacks should reset if you switch between dmg/heal.
The Q and W abilities are very generic and boring.
I know that those are her original skills from D2, but maybe you should re-think them to make them more interesting and fun.
The E ability is a bit too much. 1.5 second stun is crazy.
The first heroic is very very OP.
You basically can make the entire enemy team take 30% more damage, that's insane.
In my opinion, you should make it apply to only 1 target, and maybe reduce the cooldown so it won't be too weak as well.
There are some over powered talents like Pleasure In Pain (super OP), Eternal Torment (3 sec stun = dead hero), Shared Pain, and all the lvl 20 talents.
Overall I really like the idea of this hero/trait, but I think you should refine it a bit more.
Turn in down a notch, and get rid of boring/generic abilities.
Cheers :)
I think Piercing Agony might do a bit too much damage; It can, assuming level 1 stats, one-shot most all of the supports/assassins/specialists. Sure, it would scale slower, but it's still a bit high. Some other tuning might be needed here & there, but it looks good to me besides that.
However, I do think I've found a talent build I'd usually take:
Pleasure in Pain, Abundant Anquish, Writhe in Agony, Maiden of Anguish, The Fun's Not Over Yet/Always a Victim, Shared Pain, and Feast of Suffering/Blood Frenzy.
Auto Attack Build that can dish out immense damage or heal for incredibly high amounts of health per second.