'Master D.Va' looking for critique :: Heroes of the Storm discussion on HeroesFire

Here is my first ever Heroes of the Storm guide: Master D.Va [Dual Build]

I was lucky enough to have it featured by Heroesfire. I have experience writing guides for Team Solomid, though its been a while since I've spread my writing wings. Being my first HotS guide, I imagine there are some things I simply didn't know to include. If anyone in the community could offer some guide-ance, it would be greatly appreciated.

Some key answers I'm looking for:

Are any sections missing?
What should be the first thing I expand on?
Should I improve the formatting?
Is any information in the guide wrong?
Any typos you notice?

Posts: 2

good guide, upvoted it

The name is Latso and I have been playing a multitude of competitive pc games online for many years. The moment I heard about hots, it would become a match made in heaven and playing it would become my top priority. Since, I have been playing the game for quite a while now and have a lot of experience under my belt I took it upon myself to create hero concepts for the community.