Store Greeting (Pre-Purchase): "Hello...I am Lilian Voss."
Purchase: "I will have my revenge."
Store Greeting (Post-Purchase): "Let's hurry up here."
Ready: "I'm coming for you, Necromancer..."
Intro - Greeting Arthas: "One day, I'll come for you as well, Lich King."
Intro - Greeting Uther: "Hold, Lightbringer. I am not your enemy."
Intro - Greeting Valla: "It seems we both are meant to hunt monsters"
Intro - Greeting Greymane: "Do not confuse me for one of the Banshee Queen's servents, Worgen."
Intro - Greeting Gul'dan: "You! You are the cause of everything...I just know it..."
Intro - Greeting Zarya: "You are a massive woman...with you on our side, we can't lose."
Intro - Greeting Kel'thuzad: "You! You are lucky I do not strike you down here, Necromancer..."
Intro - Greeting Positive: "Lets hunt them down"
Intro - Greeting Negative: "Make yourself useful and strike them down."
Intro - Response Positive: "Agreed, let's cut them down."
Intro - Response Negative: "Don't make me turn these Runeblades on you."
What 1: "Yes?"
What 2: "Can I help you?"
Pissed 1: "I can't help that I have daddy issues."
Pissed 2: "What do you mean? I still have a heart. I keep it in my bag."
Pissed 3: "I see dead people...oh wait, that's just my reflection."
Pissed 4: "After my fight with Gandling, I really had to do a lot of soul searching."
Pissed 5: "Finding out that I was undead was tough at first..."
Pissed 6: "...but my look was a DEAD giveaway."
Pissed 7: "Necromancers!? Here in the Nexus!? Oh how my sword hand trembles..." (Tribute to Fire Emblem's Owain/Odin Dark)
Pissed 8: "You know, even I'm not really sure if I'm a Death Knight or a Rogue...A Death Rogue...? A Rogue Knight? Ooh...how I enjoy the sound of that..."
Move 1: "Let's move"
Move 2: "Excellent choice"
Move 3: "On it"
Move 4: "Alright let's go"
Hearthstone: "I need to catch my breath"
Getting Healed: "I thank you for your assistance."
Attack 1: "I'll end them!"
Attack 2: "Die! Die! Die!"
Attack 3: "Perish!"
Attack 4: "I'm coming for you!"
Undying Hatred Activates: "I'm not dead yet!"
Casting Death and Despair: "Suffer as I have!"
Casting Vengeful Spirit: "Feel my wrath!"
Killing a Hero 1: "You were in my way"
Killing a Hero 2: "Let's finish this, shall we?"
Killing a Hero 3: "Die, fiend!'
Killing a Hero 4: "That was almost to fun..."
Killing Arthas: "I'll end the Scourge's wrath right here!"
Killing Sylvanas: "You should've hunted me down, Banshee Queen."
Killing Stitches: "I've killed worse abominations than you!"
Killing Leoric: "I'll end the suffering of your soul, Skeletal King."
Killing Xul: "Die, Necromancer!"
Killing Gul'dan: "You cure the problem by rippng out its roots.."
Killing The Butcher: "Oh my...this isn't my blood, now is it?"
Killing Kel'thuzad: "Die, Lich!"
Death: "Your life will end once I catch my breath!"
Revived: "Now...to exact my revenge"
Ping - Kill Hero: "Quickly! Slay this hero!"
Ping - Capture Mercs: "Let's recruit these mercenaries for our cause"
Ping - Help Ally: "Our ally is in danger! Help them!"
Ping - Help Me: "Argh! I need some help!"
Ping - Destroy Fort: "Let's tear this fort to the ground"
Ping - Defend Fort: "We need to protect our fort"
Heroes of the Storm Build Guides
I like how her basic kit holds together: she's got effective ways to focus people on her and rewards for doing so with Dark Fire. She pins enemies down for her team to focus, and has a trait that's a consolation prize for being killed because she's PROBABLY going to die doing it. I'm much less hot on her ultimates: Death and Despair is basically a double-length Shrink Ray with an inferior snare, and Vengeful Spirit mirroring casts of Death's Grasp is going to mess you up more often than not because you can't control who goes to you and who goes to your spirit. Death and Despair could be saved if it hit everyone in an AoE and was her "tanking ult", not sure what to replace Venegeful Spirit with, but I wanna say some kind of long-lasting DoT effect, so she can be like "Well, my team broke off from this fight, but I gave you a present anyway."
I said I don't know her lore, but I do know there's got to be a better name for her trait than "perfectly good corpse", though that could be a talent name if that's an important bit of dialogue. How is this for a rework:
Undying Hatred: Lillian only dies X seconds [X= her level?] after her health is reduced to zero. During this time, her movement speed and damage are reduced by 35%, her mana rapidly drains, and she cannot be healed, put into stasis, or otherwise rescued from death.
Numbers might need tweaking of course, but how does that general idea grab you? I guess it is kind of like Uther, but hits the "killing me won't stop me from doing my job" thing from a differentish angle -- and while Uther's Holy Force Ghost could fit her alt skin, I think that "No, I'm not dying yet, I hate you too much to succumb to death again is pretty cool on its own.
I like how her basic kit holds together: she's got effective ways to focus people on her and rewards for doing so with Dark Fire. She pins enemies down for her team to focus, and has a trait that's a consolation prize for being killed because she's PROBABLY going to die doing it. I'm much less hot on her ultimates: Death and Despair is basically a double-length Shrink Ray with an inferior snare, and Vengeful Spirit mirroring casts of Death's Grasp is going to mess you up more often than not because you can't control who goes to you and who goes to your spirit. Death and Despair could be saved if it hit everyone in an AoE and was her "tanking ult", not sure what to replace Venegeful Spirit with, but I wanna say some kind of long-lasting DoT effect, so she can be like "Well, my team broke off from this fight, but I gave you a present anyway."
I said I don't know her lore, but I do know there's got to be a better name for her trait than "perfectly good corpse", though that could be a talent name if that's an important bit of dialogue. How is this for a rework:
Undying Hatred: Lillian only dies X seconds [X= her level?] after her health is reduced to zero. During this time, her movement speed and damage are reduced by 35%, her mana rapidly drains, and she cannot be healed, put into stasis, or otherwise rescued from death.
Numbers might need tweaking of course, but how does that general idea grab you? I guess it is kind of like Uther, but hits the "killing me won't stop me from doing my job" thing from a differentish angle -- and while Uther's Holy Force Ghost could fit her alt skin, I think that "No, I'm not dying yet, I hate you too much to succumb to death again is pretty cool on its own.
Hey, let me just say I am sorry it took me so long to respond to your comment. I'm excited to get some feed back as I know the Concepts I am coming up with is not perfect. Receiving feedback on what you think should happen is a great way to helping me hone my skills on what I need to change. Going on that, let me go ahead and respond to what you have said:
Talking about the name of her trait "A Perfect Good Corpse", I had named it that because that is the name of one of the Phases of her fight in the Scholomance Dungeon in World of Warcraft. Just for now, I am going to leave the name until I (or someone more intelligent than I) can come up with a better name for it.
Going on to what you were talking about on her basic abilities, thank you! I am glad that they are liked! Going onto her Heroics, I can kind of agree with you. I was looking for stuff that would be connected to her, while giving her a sense of uniqueness to it that would over-all be effective for her role as a Warrior. But I am afraid I did not quite hit the mark lol I'll completely rework Death and Despair, changing the ability completely soon. I have some sort of an idea what I want to change it to. I'll certainly take in your suggestion for Death and Decay.
Talking about Vengeful Spirit...I'm afraid I am stumped. I'll figure something out, where I'll keep the aspect of her shooting out her spirit, but I'll change it to be better fitting for a Warrior-type build such as hers.
I really enjoy your suggestion for Undying Hatred, and I will be sure to add it in as soon as I go in to make changes to her. Thank you!
I'll work on the numbers, and see if I can pump out something a bit more balanced.
Thanks again for your input! It is really helpful!